Saturday, December 19, 2009

Fake Smiles And Lies. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wake up each morning
With another tear stained face
And no matter how hard I try
These tears I can't erase
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Emily Reid
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george george 20 December 2009

Very powerful, as well as having a nice flow and excellent rhyming scheme. Good work Emily!

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Emma Jane Rae 19 December 2009

OMG this poem is absolutly amazing! ! well done!

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Emma Jane Rae 19 December 2009

OMG this poem is amazing absolutly brilliant! ! ! well done

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Aspen, CO
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