Sunday, June 4, 2006

Fantasy Comments

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Whitewashed pier in urgent rain
Lays me down upon the sand
Drenched and yielding and again
Gentle in the lover’s hand
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Alison Campbell
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Neil Marsden 12 October 2008

Absolutely stunning Poem! ! To be honest I was totally captivated by the first stanza, such beauty, grace, intimacy and sensuality condensed into just a few gorgeous lines. The remainder of the piece continued to build to the climax so intelligently conveyed, simply beautiful - You have a fan! 10 all day long. Neil.

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