Thursday, July 31, 2014

Fare Thee Well Comments

Rating: 3.8

Fare thee well, my old friend.
I've suddenly realised -
I haven't needed you in a long time -
You're part of my life no longer.
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bryan wallace
COMMENTS
Achill Lad 30 September 2014

Kicked the habit, good for you. An interesting read. Well done.

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Arthur Moore 31 July 2014

Hi Bryan, Another really good poem. I am a reformed smoker myself and used to look upon cigarettes as little friends that I could turn to. I like the way your poem deceives one in the early lines into believing the subject is a woman. Cleverly done.

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F J Thomas 31 July 2014

hm... :) good for you Bryan Wallace

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