Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Flipside: A Sonnet Duet Comments

Rating: 5.0

You Leave – Never Will I Love

Forever and a day, I’ll wait for you.
Always, I will remember what we shared.
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Sam Cronk
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Buscador Del Palabra 15 October 2009

This is an amazing poem... Very well crafted... the mirror rhyme scheme... a mirrored thsonnet, and then that sonnet mirrored again, all with a message of love... truly wonderful.... Mike

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Gold Fish 10 October 2009

Sam - Quite clever indeed. I like the latter better than the former, since it brings resolution to situation. The latter describes the situation and feelings associated with the loss in the beginning and then towards the end these feelings are accepted. But, I must say it is amazing that you could get the whole things to read well both forwards and backwards.10+ Keep it up. You are very talented. :) .

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