Monday, March 30, 2009

Flowers Comments

Rating: 4.5

this poem was written by my 11 year old friend. she loves poetry but is new to writing. she invites everyone who reads it to constructivly critize her poetry so she may become better at it.

F is for Full, open and bright
L is for leaves petals and seeds
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Jennie Bregan
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Adeline Foster 17 July 2013

What a lovely anagram. So pleased to hear it is by a rising poet. I am sure she has success ahead. May she read some of mine especially Bloom of Youth - and Eft. Adeline

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Heather Wilkins 11 July 2013

for 11 years old this is a talent for writing. She should continue this all her life. She can do nothing but get better and better nice write and she understand the form, lovely write young lady

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Jennie Bregan

Jennie Bregan

uniontown pennsylvania
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