Follow Me Poem by aashka thakkar

Follow Me

Rating: 5.0


Take my hand and follow me
to place where i long to be.
Take my hand and trust my way
in that place forever say.
Follow me toward sand;
we will run and play hand in hand.
Take my heart and hold it true;
forever i will stay close you.
Seize my words and listen well,
then forever i will tell
Release your heart and feeling too,
just as i will do for you.
Trust your heart and follow me
to that place i long to be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aditya Pathak 10 November 2009

beautiful composition..... U have actually evolved as a poetess..... n this composition z d voice of your heart........... d 1st n last thing a true composition demands! ! :) :) .....10

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