Saturday, September 19, 2009

For Even As I Smiled.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I do not know
Where it has gone…
The virtue; my resolve;
To be a human
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Dosvedanya Rashia
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Patti Masterman 19 September 2009

This is a heavy poem. You have the eyes of a poet; so you are already halfway to Gandhi. Don't take too much advice. Just be yourself. Wonderful writing all through this. (smile)

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Dosvedanya Rashia

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