Friday, May 18, 2012

For Someone Special Comments

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Everyday, I make up my mind
That I would strike up a conversation
On some topic, any, it mattered not
As long as her eyes would be on mine.
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Mangesh Sonawane
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Akanksha Sharma 23 November 2012

She will love you :)

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Margaret Alice Second 18 May 2012

This is an amazingly clear and natural poem, it indicates real feeling as opposed to the false declarations of love with which poets through the ages have tried to impress readers - and alienated a large part of the population. This is impressive expression of emotion and I hope you keep on writing.

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