Everyday, I make up my mind
That I would strike up a conversation
On some topic, any, it mattered not
As long as her eyes would be on mine.
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This is an amazingly clear and natural poem, it indicates real feeling as opposed to the false declarations of love with which poets through the ages have tried to impress readers - and alienated a large part of the population. This is impressive expression of emotion and I hope you keep on writing.
She will love you :)