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For Susan A

Rating: 3.5

The tale told
Of broken dreams
Of words spilling
Searching, and soaked
Untidy house
Fractured mind
poisoned from within
Our choice, our blame
The story just the same
Unfulfilled potential

The anchor of the soul
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John Kay 24 September 2005

Adrian...there's something powerful going on here, but I'm missing its essence, I think, because of the abstractions like soul, hope, spirit, and life. I'm a lazy reader and need to get deeper into a poem on the first reading than this one allowed.

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