is like faking an orgasm—
everyone involved is cheated,
and anyone familiar with the rhythm of the real thing
knows it
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I read a lot of poetry. As a rule most of it is written without thought to skill in its expression, especially in the form of free verse. I find most of it lackluster and redundant, while your verse is to the contrary. I rarely pause to comment.... thank you for this opportunity... superb!
I read a lot of poetry. As a rule most of it is written without thought to skill in its expression, especially in the form of free verse. I find most of it lackluster and redundant, while your verse is to the contrary. I rarely pause to comment.... thank you for this opportunity... superb!
I couldn't let this wonderful thing get off without a comment. (smile)
Thanks so much - I really appreciate you taking the time to comment on it. It is pleasing to know that someone's day was brightened by something I've written - that's the whole point, I guess! :)