Forsaken Pray Poem by Jacob Courtney

Forsaken Pray

Rating: 4.5


I stand in the cross roads of life. I must go
one way or another. The devil pushes me
tricks me into stepping off towards his dark
insanity. Where he plays games that torment
the heart and soul. Each time he lures me in
a different way so just when I think I am
above it I find myself back in fighting to
pull myself out of this darkness that has
taken its hold deep within the people
around me. The darkness how it just
pulls you in with the power of a blackhole.
The devil makes it seem like there is
no escape. The games he plays clouds
my vision making it to where it seems
there is no light in the dark. I find myself
praying at each nights end with no hope
in sight. It feels as if God has forsaken
those who have forsaken him. Lord
forgive me for ever doubting in you.
I shall no longer forsake you or your
glourious plan. Guide me from this dark
valley take me away from this place lead
me to a land where your grace reigns supreme.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anna Dorfman 26 October 2009

I`m speechless........... it`s great! say you understand it as i ammmmmmmmmmmm a GREAT lines

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Prakash Mehra 12 October 2009

Well structured poetry. God bless you.

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