Monday, July 9, 2018

Four Friends Comments

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Four friends took off on a boat
To the island that lay a mile or two of the coast

One dived into the sea all happy and chirpy
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Sujan Azad Parikh
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Dr Antony Theodore 09 July 2018

All afraid and lonely, the last one was in misery An arrow pierced his heart and ended his agony. a little story poem.. very nicely portrayed poem.. thank u very much dear poet. tony

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Sujan Azad Parikh 10 July 2018

Thanks a ton Dr. Tony Brahmin.

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