Wednesday, October 27, 2010

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hollow like a dry, dead tree
spirit (stuck) in the middle of the trunk
that can never be set free
and I admit my mistake
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Khalid Hameed
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Macy Anne 01 November 2010

I love how in the beginning of your poem, you said, 'hollow like a dry, dead tree' and then ended with, 'and meet you in heaven under the palm tree'. Lovely and definitely free-feeling.

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