Monday, March 22, 2010

Friendship Comments

Rating: 3.5

Love is friendship,
comes and goes like chocolate chips.
You share it with your friends,
They’ll love you til’ the end.
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jasmine Johnson
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Lady Grace 22 March 2010

love is sharing..love guides..love connects two hearts that r blind..love never command but it expresses requests...love conquers love suffers..love is you..ya, i promise, love is u...

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Gerald Sedillo 22 March 2010

Kinda blunt in the end stanza rhyme, but I can almost feel a stress pattern emerging. Kudos and keep growing (^^

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