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This is my first sonnet.. My friend inspired me in this poem...

I watch the trees go dance from side to side,
fantasize all dreams of wealth and pleasure.
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Raven Black and Blue
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Raven Black 11 July 2010

Thank you Jennifer! I appreciate your comment and it inspired me to do better.. :)

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Jennifer Parker 10 July 2010

What a beautiful poem! It really touched me and I can even say it even changed me after reading it. You are truly gifted Joana Ms. Raven Black and Blue!

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