Fun In Death Poem by Rik Bertrand

Fun In Death

Rating: 4.5


BURIED ALIVE WITHIN A TOMB,
BURIED IN A COLD DARK ROOM.
ALIVE AND BREATHING DIRTY AIR,
AND YET STILL, I DON’ CARE.

IN THE NIGHT, THEY THOUGHT ME DEAD,
AS I LAY SLEEPING IN MY BED.
THEY LAID ME OUT FOR ALL TO SEE,
AND IN MY MIND I DRANK TEA.

I LAID THERE AS THEY ALL CRIED,
AND LISTENED AS THEY ALL LIED.
THEY SAID THEY LOVE ME THROUGH AND THROUGH,
BUT I KNEW THOSE WHO SPOKE TRUE.

REVENGE IS ROLLING THROUGH MY MIND,
AND IN REVENGE I WILL NOT BE KIND.
I WILL STEAL THE SOULS OF EACH AND EVERYONE,
AND I DARE SAY, IT WILL BE FUN.

REB.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Revolutionary, a desperate voice towards all directions. Your poem ignores death in a very funny way. This is poetry! The poem ends recalling Mefistophelis (Faust) but using a different method. Again this is a well crafted poetry. I give it a 9 (you will soon approach the levels of 10) . Thanks for sharing dear poet Rik Bertrand.

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Rik Bertrand

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Portland, Oregon
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