Wednesday, March 13, 2013

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Streams of clouds, like boats
Floats across the ocean of blue sky
The autumn golden yellow leaves
They shine in triumphant glory.
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Anthony Mondal
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Viktor Tichy 29 June 2022

Anthony, pay attention to grammar in your poems. Make sure the verb corresponds to the noun. To say 'the birds sings' can be a simple typo or a change partially executed, but if repeated, it screams Dilettante!

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