abdul razaq

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God Grant! I Know - Poem by abdul razaq

Few days ago
Bees came
Sat down on a tree
ONe corner of our town
Same day in the evening
I sat
In my lawn of the house
What i see
Few bees are flying around
Lights and plants
I began to think
Could these could go their hive
Which is in the other corner of the town
Darkness prevailed
I was worried
Whould that! could not go to their hive
I became sad
God grant! i know
Language of bees too
Can help them
Can tell them the address
To thier hive
I could not help them
I pray
To God almighty
Reach the bees into their hive
they will die
How can they live without their family

April 7,2008

Comments about God Grant! I Know by abdul razaq

  • (9/9/2014 10:54:00 PM)

    This poem is very touching heart.
    I am very glad to know that you have such ideas and
    thoughts about these creatures in your feelings, heat and passions.
    I have no words in your praise because you are nice and good person in this world.
    Thanks a lot
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  • (4/3/2010 12:37:00 AM)

    home sweet home...is where one is the safest, is the haven where one finds solace. a kind-hearted poem (Report) Reply

  • Ershad Mazumder (9/29/2008 9:50:00 AM)

    Theme is very good.But it has become a narrative short story.I appreciate your feeling. (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2008 3:27:00 AM)

    A very touching poem. I am glad you have fondness for the little creatures in your heart. kat (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 7, 2008

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