Wednesday, June 23, 2010

Gone Comments

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i cry myself to sleep at night
for he has gone away
the skys are no longer blue
for they are now gray
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Shelby Kaitlin Taylor
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Lynn Glover 28 June 2010

There is a little bit of rhyming here, but try hard to tell a story about anything, school, vacation, places you have visited, about Grandma and Grandpa. But try hard to tell a story. Your friend in poetry, Lynn.

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Shelby Kaitlin Taylor

Shelby Kaitlin Taylor

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