Monday, November 22, 2010

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Shes home alone
No one sees her bleeding
Alone in her room filled with tears
She grabs the blade, thinking with this,
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Geo xxxx
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Oladele Noah 22 November 2010

Nice suspense. You see what I was saying in your previous poem. It was flowing and motivating. I know for sure that this generation is full of ace poets like me and you. Keep writing.

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