Saturday, February 20, 2016

Good By Comments

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keep it short and alive
saying goodby
the friendship has flopped
and no one will catch my rain drop
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Vasiliki Dolas
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Mike Smith 20 February 2016

I think I'd like this more if you would write it out in proper words Ur, = your. Good by = good bye.4 ever = for ever.... Your really only saving yourself a few clicks on the keyboard. But what you lose is an image of maturity. Not trying to be rude, honestly I'm hoping that you receive this message as advice not attack, but don't write your poems they way you text your friends... It looks juvenile

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