Goodbye Poem by chris urbaez

Goodbye

Rating: 5.0


in the dark i lay
loveless and in pain
eventualy i become so numb
and i wish my life was done

i dream sweet dreams twixt fireand ice
all of those things they sound so nice
soon reality takes over stabbing my nerves
and from there on any thoughts of escape seems absurd

its seems the one i loved shut the heavens gate
she left me here to rot and waste
i have come to say that i will soon die
and to say that i will soon die
and to say that i love you and to say goodbye

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Nevaeh 101 09 March 2010

Hey this poem is really really good. it made me cry. my feelings towards this poem is that i can actually put myself into the mood and feel myself dying and telling the one i loved good-bye and tell them one more time that i loved them.

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Kerry green evil becomes her 09 February 2010

another great poem i love the darkness in your poetry

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