Monday, February 8, 2010

Grey Comments

Rating: 5.0

Grey is my heart saturated with tainted memories,
The grey pollutes my insides like the pregnant grey clouds paint the skies,
Painted with a depression so strong it helps to cut with a razor only,
Love only exists in fairytales and happy endings are pretend.
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Aly Grey 08 February 2010

I'm new in the poetry world and i'll appreciate if i can get some constructive criticism and ways in which i can improve myself. pleaase and thank you.

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Aly Grey

Aly Grey

new orleans
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