ok first and foremost I liked this piece, it was direct and made your point. The only issue I have with this is the small mistakes in it. But if you correct them, and if you could find it in you to remove the internet grammar this would be so much better. But that is just my opinion.
And I for one love the darkness in the night
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ok first and foremost I liked this piece, it was direct and made your point. The only issue I have with this is the small mistakes in it. But if you correct them, and if you could find it in you to remove the internet grammar this would be so much better. But that is just my opinion. And I for one love the darkness in the night