Thankyou for a lovely poem Pam. My I please make a comment?
If I were you I would shorten your lines. Make each comma a new line so that the reading is easier on the eye.
Hugs
Jan
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Thankyou for a lovely poem Pam. My I please make a comment? If I were you I would shorten your lines. Make each comma a new line so that the reading is easier on the eye. Hugs Jan