Friday, February 18, 2005

Help! Comments

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Help!

Help me what needs to seen,
but not in the wrong way.
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Pam Fraser
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dissatified exmember 19 February 2005

Thankyou for a lovely poem Pam. My I please make a comment? If I were you I would shorten your lines. Make each comma a new line so that the reading is easier on the eye. Hugs Jan

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Theodora Onken 18 February 2005

Yes, I do! Good poem, very good poem

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