Friday, September 7, 2007

Hiding The Truth Comments

Rating: 2.8

I sit here thinking,
What a mess I’ve become,
Haunting memories,
Of the bad things I’ve done,
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Gemma Nolan
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Adeline Foster 20 May 2009

OK there, some deep thoughts. Read mine 'Saturday Morning Mood'. Adeline

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Lady Lyn Rosete - Buchan 07 September 2007

Well, I guess I am a bit 'hiding the truth' sometimes too. It's like you have made into words the things that is often left unsaid and hidden..well done.

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Random Crap 07 September 2007

A good write Gemma. Can i advise splitting this up into stanza's think it would make it easier to read. And lets the reader focus on each section at a time. Well done x-x-x

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