Monday, June 20, 2016

His Blessing Comments

Rating: 4.8

He loved her with all the love that his little heart can hold,
She was his everything. All that he lived for.
But one day she was gone, a story untold. She was a blessing to all, the one who he thanked god for every night. She was the one who saved everyone from a horrible fall. the moment she was gone it was such a fright. Rumors were told some were true and others were completely fake, a block of pain was thrown on everyone's hearts
their tears were so plenty that it collected and became a lake.
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Rahaf Alqahtani MNSR
COMMENTS
Soha Zidan 20 September 2016

You left me wondering where the young lady went, and how could she simply disappear after being such a giving person. A poem worth thinking about. Thanks for sharing.

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Zainab Hussein Mns-r 20 June 2016

Your poems are really nice :)

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