Saturday, November 24, 2007

Holding My Toes Comments

Rating: 5.0

An evening primrose glides,
on my rough hands.
I pluck a laugh from the lips,
of a parched face.
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Satish Verma
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Roger Cornish 25 November 2007

When I read poetry like this it illustrates how far I have, Poetically, to travel. So, I'll make up some sandwiches and get on my way.... and if I get even close to your writing, then I will be thrilled!

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