Friday, August 29, 2014

Hot Dog Fight At The Supermarket Comments

Rating: 4.0

the hot dogs came alive
one package at a time
slithering from moist wrappers
seeking warm buns
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Kevin Rottweiler
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kim kate 29 March 2016

I have eaten hot-dog after reading this and it was the so delicious and crispy

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Gajanan Mishra 29 August 2014

good writing, thanks.

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Mohammad Skati 29 August 2014

Making things lovely and lively. A well-done poem.

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