Hot Rice Poem by Noah Smits

Hot Rice



Hot rice
on a cold day
January twelfth
with spice
in a saucepan
I made it myself

Uncooked
in a packet
dormant on the shelf
I looked
in my cabinet
and made it myself

Hot rice
is a trifling
thing for one to seek
but life
has an odd way
of passing a week

with chores
and commitments
grinding without end—
what bore
January
eleven and ten?

What yield
did I credit
toward my own wealth?
Hot rice
in a saucepan
I made it myself

So tame,
simple, shallow,
blind to how I feel:
my claim:
nothing special
just real, real, real, real.

Monday, March 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: food
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A silly little poem about a silly little thing (making rice)which gave me a sense of purpose by presenting me with a tangible change I made
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
The Reaper 16 March 2018

The bus is pro

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