Saturday, October 4, 2014

I Can'T Handle The Flame Comments

Rating: 5.0

I can't handle the flame,
And no one is to blame.
When I think of you my body starts to flutter,
Wanting to know more makes me sputter.
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Jamie Fox
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Michael Mcparland 14 November 2014

Pure excellence. Pure electricity and power in that feeling and moment. Love it.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 04 October 2014

The moment will so bitter sweet, Beautifully expressed feelings. Nice job.

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Michael Mcparland 04 October 2014

Such a very very sweet beautiful poem. I love it. Very wonderful piece.

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