Wednesday, October 28, 2009

I Crash And I Fall Comments

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I crash and I fall,
I turn and I cry,
I fuss and I fight,
I feel like a mistake,
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nikki irvine
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N. K. 25 July 2014

I love this poem. I love how you wove your words into this, your creation. I found this rather sad, but amazing and inspiring. I can connect to this, because I've crashed and fallen before. But I stood up, and I know you can stand up again. There' s always someone to help you stand up and hold you. Your poem is wonderful.

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N. K. 25 July 2014

I love your poem. I love how you wove your words into this, your creation. I find this sad, yet amazing and inspiring. I can connect to this, because I've crashed and fallen before. Know that you're not alone, and you can get up again with because there is always someone to help you and hold you.

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