I Just Lost Someone...! ! ! Poem by rose of death XxX

I Just Lost Someone...! ! !

Rating: 5.0


hi! ! my name is rena and i just lost someone...
the way he looked at me...
the way he said thous things...
the way he said he hated me...
the way he said he wants to kill me...
the way he he said he wished i was never born...
the way he said he wants to poison me...
to poison me with rates poison...
the way he said he's gonna hit me untill i bleed to death...
the way he hitted me...
the way i felt pain...
pain in my heart allthough i was sore...
i was sore because there was my DAD hitting me...
my own dad wants me dead...
i just lost someone and that someone is about to murdure me...
i wanna run but i can't...
i wanna scream but i'm afraid...
i wanna kill myself but that would make hem happy...

All I Can Do For Now Is Cry! ! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 29 May 2009

this poem is emotional..love turns to hatred, , grace

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 May 2009

Touchy: 10++ 'i wanna run but i can't... i wanna scream but i'm afraid... i wanna kill myself but that would make hem happy...'

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Lisa Anderson 06 May 2009

awwww this poem had me thinking of you dont worry about it the person is not obviously worth your time or effort but i can understand you might love the person you lost but if they were treating you like that you should try and get over them as soon as possible otherwise you will never get over them this can cause you to live in complete distress and you dont deserve this do you? ?

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