Sunday, August 24, 2008

I Love You Comments

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This passion burning in my heart
Me and you, till death do us apart
This flame eternally alight
For you are the most beautiful sight
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Jon Evans
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Jon Evans 24 August 2008

Yes, i'd agree with that, tbh id do both xD lol. I'd cry with her, but at the same time id wipe away all of her tears...it just didnt fit into the poem haha =P and thank you for the comment =) . Much appreciated =D.

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Cody Wisneski 24 August 2008

very nice. one comment though. if she cries, you should wipe them away and stop the tears. other than that a lovely poem.

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