Saturday, July 7, 2007

I'M Trying Comments

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Mother. This seems to be my only avenue to reach you.
Its such a long long drive to get to you.
I really feel I'll never reach you.
Did I make a wrong turn?
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Heather GH
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Dom Wisperez 07 July 2007

Touching...I sense your antisipation and anxiety over reaching your mother and having her understand. Keep trying! Poem has good integrity and is organized.

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