Thursday, May 29, 2014

I May Find You..... Comments

Rating: 3.8

Waiting for someone to fill the empty spaces
watching the shadows my soul still chases
hiding the pains, living in my memories
Hoping i may find you, somewhere in the stories
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Aditya Tiwari
May
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Tim Kitchin 29 May 2014

Like the different aspects of seeking to understand what happened and reconnect to the past. The sense of yearning and emptiness is strong... Not sure why use more direct language e.g. 'the start'. Can't see a rhythmic reason not to...

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