I Miss You Poem by Dhaval Rathod

I Miss You

Rating: 5.0


As the sun promises to stay ablaze,
And infinitely commits to keep its gaze,
I miss you.

As the sky changes its color and shades,
And as the moonlight brightens and fades,
I miss you.

As the ocean waves break on the rocks,
And as the time moves slowly on the clocks,
I miss you.

As the mountains echo the sweet voices,
And teach us to stand fast to our choices,
I miss you.

As the rivers dance with a graceful flow,
And under moonlight they pleasantly glow,
I miss you.

As my breaths turn in and out in a fine motion,
Humming your name with supreme devotion,
I miss you.

As my thoughts keep you in focus day and night,
only your memories and images they do recite,
I miss you.

As my heart rhythmically beats your name,
And pumps blood to every part of your claim,
I miss you.

As our souls get merged in unity and settles
to a grand perfection of lovely pink-petals,
I miss you.

Friday, July 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,missing you
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The phrase " pink petals" towards the end of the poem was actually a code-word between the poet and his lover for " I love you" .
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 13 July 2018

As the sky changes its color and shades, And as the moonlight brightens and fades, I miss you. Beautiful comparisons, great images, conveying deep felt love.. thank u dear poet. tony

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success