Sunday, May 16, 2010

I Missed You Today.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The rain brought with it,
your memories today..
And I yearned for your presence...
I would have hid behind you,
...
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Rasika Kalyanikar
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Deepak G 25 September 2012

SOMEONE TRUELY LOVE YOU FROM LONGTIME... AND HE MISS YOU EVERYDAY..

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okiez... well, this is an exceptional case i must say that havnt read anything so beautiful before.... read it for 'him', u'll get encore from first to last line the poem captivated my mind the rhythms, the rhymes perfectly sublime u missed him that day do it every day write daily 'i missed him today' haha :) a perfect poem of my type.... depicting a highly imaginative situation with RAIN! ! ! ! WaTeR WaTeR ShOuLd bE EvErYwHeRe... simply mindblowin... 10.5 on 10... hehi

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Rasika Kalyanikar

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