Thursday, January 14, 2010

I Need To Break Comments

Rating: 5.0

I Need to Break
Daylight breaks again
I could not sleep last night
When the moon declined in the Western sky
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Ratan Bhattacharjee
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 21 March 2010

Why break not? Tired be not? Why not be Slog…. swig? … Let Poet’s be dreamer of every thing… But your finish is: ‘…I need to break the dreams/And all that I longed for….’ You wanted your fancy of, ‘…My mind was exhausted, body weary…’ to be curbed….and the message lies here…focused thru your vigilant psychic eyes … Unbuckle Unshackle and feel the freedom and out of boredom...fuse with buoyancy akin to Salvation =Mukti 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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