The First Glimpse of this radiant creature, unraveled mind's clarity
Enchanted fairy tale innocence, God's miracle gift, 'tis rarity
My Heavens opened, likening the world stage parting the red sea
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Stinging and powerful! I like this part: My Heavens opened, likening the world stage parting the red sea Innocence so lovely Angel's sang chorus of my heart felt melody Nice visuals. The ending of the poem is so disparate from the beginning, but you make the transition well.