Monday, April 13, 2009

I Pray As I Prey Comments

Rating: 4.8

The First Glimpse of this radiant creature, unraveled mind's clarity
Enchanted fairy tale innocence, God's miracle gift, 'tis rarity

My Heavens opened, likening the world stage parting the red sea
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Robert Anthony
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george george 18 December 2009

Stinging and powerful! I like this part: My Heavens opened, likening the world stage parting the red sea Innocence so lovely Angel's sang chorus of my heart felt melody Nice visuals. The ending of the poem is so disparate from the beginning, but you make the transition well.

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