yearning of parched earth
melts the heart of heavens
rain falls.
fragrance rises from the soaked earth
and greenery lies for miles.
intoxicated by an unknown bliss
peacocks dance in delight.
a varied world of creatures come to life
and with the unruly wind and under the noisy clouds
i too dance in the rain!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I think you could remove the first two lines and your poem would be stronger.