It was a bright sunny morning and I stood on a side;
Gazing at my crying mother;
Staring at my sobbing father.
It seemed something terrible had happened;
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Wow!
I love this poem....its got really great suspense and the ending is great. How did you manage to think of yourself as dead? Great poem...great language used.
(10/10 from me!)
Keep up the great writing
Dona
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Wow! I love this poem....its got really great suspense and the ending is great. How did you manage to think of yourself as dead? Great poem...great language used. (10/10 from me!) Keep up the great writing Dona