I Witness A Raven Poem by Caroline Misner

I Witness A Raven

Rating: 4.3


When the moonlight fractures the patterned frost,
in fragments chiseled into the glass,
shattering and refracting its battery
of light, in silent solace through my window,
I witness a raven through eyes
thick and glazed with sleep.
The night hermit probes his feast

of carrion, picking at entrails, a solitary
meal devoured beneath the round moon’s
undaunted glare, refracting the criss-cross
claw marks on the crust.
The boughs and branches
are furred with frost, casting their shadows
upon dunes of snow. He lifts his hollow

wings, a rancid clump of meat in his beak,
and springs upon a limb, scattering
the snow that’s sprinkled there;
the moon wears a ring
of diffused blue, foretelling snow in the morning,
replenishing the chill in the wind.
The stars that cut the blue-black sky sing

like crystals, but are dulled to wet parchment.
The hesitant dawn is inching its hazy throat
toward the horizon, and the raven, a lone witness
to the dying night. The black pearls of his eyes
shine with a cold luster, untouched
by the palls of weather,
toughened by the glint of his harsh feather.

Friday, March 21, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: branches,pearls,raven,snow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 25 October 2008

Caroline this had me in it's grip from beginning to end - your poetic choices are really good and your imagery shines. I intend to take this one with me in my favourites and wish I could give you more than ten..... keep up this style of writing, you have a great talent for it..... my fondest wishes from Fay.

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