Sunday, February 24, 2019

I Write To You... Comments

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I write to you in green ink,
Because love is an open door
To the hope of discovering you
In moments of desire.
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Marcel Moreau
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T Wignesan 26 February 2019

Bonjour Marcel! And thank you very much for your " thanks" for the re-translation I like your poem: the pathos is evidently deeply felt, though here and there I felt you could have added a word or two despite the " Imagist" Pound constraints. I deliberately used " spirit" in the English connotation in the last line. Notwithstanding the Verlaine theme...

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