Wednesday, October 22, 2008
If For One Moment Comments
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If for one moment, Life goes my way.
my heart want sink or shrink nor leave me sway.
If for one moment, I had you in my life.
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2/21/2026 8:11:21 PM # 1.0.0
Dear Junius Barnes, Your poem does not rhyme in the least. Are these supposed to be heroic couplets? Do YOU know what meter is? Also: do you know what a sentence is? It is in the opinion of this humble commentator, that you do not... Go back to school, try reading some real poetry, and come back when you have an elementary grasp of the English language. With regret (that I read this) , Phalloides