They say
it's a wonderful
place.
I can't feel it
that much,
at the moment.
They say
it's all hearts
and stars.
I think I need
to bleed a bit
just to feel that.
There must be
something wrong
with this world.
Or maybe,
something was
wrong with me.
But then he said,
I'll fix this world up
if you want me to.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the build up to the climax is as beautiful as it can get! ! ! end is beautiful too...but regarding your standard of writing; i think u could have created magic in the end! ! anyway a great write!