Monday, September 8, 2025

I'll Love You Better When I'm Dead Comments

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To think about how dearly you hold me
Unnecessarily latched to my heart
Like a withering leech drinking poison
So I can only hold you when I'm cold
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Jacob Underwood
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Emmanuel Ayeni 01 October 2025

Oh wow! A very thoughtful piece embedded with powerful words. The poet sees himself as a burden. This can be said to be an honest confession of someone who believes their greatest gift of love is sacrifice, even if it means disappearing, regardless of the pain it may bring

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