Monday, April 9, 2007

Im Sorry Comments

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im sorry little girl wat have you done
i dint understand wen you had fun
i cared for you but you did wat you did
you took all thoes pills cuz you didnt want to live.
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Lolita Hiroshi 16 April 2007

understanble....but sad... and it happens and it sure feels awful wen u feel like u didnt do anyting to help

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Stug Jordan 13 April 2007

Well said, but written with a charming disregard for spelling and grammar which I almost don't want you to correct. Sorry about your friend, and well done for the way in which you've communicated how you feel, how your friend must have felt, and the horridness of the situation... S x

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Amber Luce 09 April 2007

Wow. this poem is very touching. I can kinda relate. My friend is going through a tough time and tried to commit suicide many times with medication. You have some type-o's in here but besides that I give you a ten. About your friend..i send you my deepest condolences.

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