Terrible pulses triggered the head
Each beat played like drums in ache
Made me super sore and weak
I couldn’t speak, I am framed like shrimp
Enduring the side effects of pills
Sweat formed in cold droplets
Shaking all thoughts vanishing my dreams
Giving in to the water world
Of hopelessness in my half faced journey
2009,24 of Oct.
Nice poem, very visual and imaginative. thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***
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And yet, you were still able to write this 'Amazing' piece of poetry in emotional torment! It seems to me, the affect of those pills is countered by your poetic spills. Whatever your reason to take them, if you need them, you must, but never mess with the prescription. A friends son, stopped taking his meds for ADHD and then a few weeks later, decided to try them again...she described his physical reaction, just like you do here...the body is not used to it, was my conclusion, so be careful, is my motherly advice. Have a great weekend Smiling at you Tai