In Love With A Friend Poem by Lexus Box

In Love With A Friend

Rating: 5.0


the sun glisting on your skin
the wind in your hair
the smile on your face
the warm embrace you give me
why can't i have
why don't you love me
you say we just friends
but that can't be
because i love you
don't you see
Your beauty reflects on me
you'll will be mine
my wife
my love
my everything
but now you're my friend
that i truly love
till the end

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 04 June 2012

What a true pouring out of your heart. May I mention a few hints. The 'we' in line seven could be a contraction (we're) . In line 12 the 'you'll' already containes the 'will'. Otherwise a good poem. Read mine - Sympathetic Pain - Adeline

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